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hypertext shouting.
Thursday, February 23, 2006
whistling
i hear whistling -
a bird sits high and warbles.
Happiness?
-Terence.
P.s. D, your poem has a last line that seems an afterthought, a tack-on, when i think the idea was for emphasis. Perhaps you could try changing the last stanza to reflect this?
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