double bill.
Hug
hovering on each other's edges
there is a precipice of indecision
in the split second of eye contact
a buzz (is it electrical, or some force of the soul?)
there is a rush; and the moment
vibrates
between the could be
or maybe should not then there is no hope
when it's over we wonder if it really happened;
was it some sort of insanity
(but we feel the lingering warmth down our sides)
Leaves
no telling when the wind will blow
its coming or its leaving
except the sound of moving leaves
a silence's gentle sieving
between the bars of quiet
with luck a footstep may trawl
a passing car makes angry air
on an evening's sultry drawl.
my breath intrudes;
Silence is the friend of feet
voices give way to headlights
and the sound of a darkened street.
adam
Friday, June 15, 2007
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1 comments:
wtf? amazing.
Hug nicely crystallises every single stage of the hug - were you savouring the moment, or just too much experience? O.o
Leaves has brilliant ideas... like the idea of motion tied with the iambic meter. the language isn't rich but it's evocative in spite of that... esp the last stanza.
damnit. almost too good.
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