tramping down to the river side
with our frenzied faces each aglow
we sat down there to watch the tide
each hoping that the tide would show,
each hoping that the tide would know
to join us there to play our game;
hoping each that the tide would show
as the sun set with a yellow flame.
keeping our watches synchronized.
huddling up against the snow -
There it is! one watchman cried
Each hoping that the tide would show,
We huddled toe to toe to toe
but breaking on the bank there came
a swelling from the dark below,
but left the river bank the same.
sighing, disappointed-eyed,
we thought that it was time to go
our shivering faces belied
the sweetness of the weather, though –
we’d each hoped that the tide would show.
we walked back slowly, fighting shame
that crept red up our cheeks and brows
and the sun set with a yellow flame.
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a ballade i had to do for my class. I know it's missing the 4-line envoi at the end, but
1) i ran out of rhymes
2) i don't really know any princes
and 3) stop oppressing my art with your rules
2 comments:
You coulda done a ballade royale. That has four stanzas, no envoi. I know, I used to write those.
running out of rhymes, dude. I need to consult Eminem on these things.
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