Haiku Love Song, by ryan d.
A short, poignant vignette about love in a field under the night sky. RonHermione. Rated T for mild adult themes.
Monday, October 10, 2005
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LOL I love the metaphors! And all of the powerful expressions! If you were trying to bring out how trivial love can be, though... I really don't know whether to read deeper into this or not. A good read, and welcome change from all the dreariness!
Good job, ryan. woot. overblown melodrama at its crispest best.
5 out of 5 for style!
adam
@derrick: don't bother reading into it. there's nothing there. really. lol.
@adam: thanks!
omigod.. it's so bitingly cynical. plus one million points for coolness.
When I read it, I thought of.. hmm. The incredible use of metaphors...
lol..
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