Thursday, August 17, 2006

coffee in brown spattered trails,
scribbles in ice lemon tea;
lost when inspiration fails,
oh my muse, come back to me.

2 comments:

Derrick said...

its a very specific image, but one that works for me! haha.
the coffee line conveys desperation, and the ice lemon tea line gives me the feeling of someone idly playing around.
nice!

ryan d said...

haha that's exactly the image i had in mind when i wrote this poem two years back.

thanks for commenting!

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