I was bored one day, and so decided to write an alliterative sonnet.
There were two versions of the last line, and I couldn't decide on which to use.
Additionally, I vote that September should be the Month of the Sonnet. XD
-------
learn to love the cruel lash of fate,
the slithering snake whose wounds will not abate;
the scars which smoulder still upon your skin,
the lance that lodges in your life within.
learn contentment, to your soul deny
the foolish thought that you might fate defy;
the flame of hope that favour falls with you;
the cold that winter brings you life anew.
yet;
learn to hate the hour of your death,
the winds that wail and whimper your last breath;
the wire that wraps upon your broken neck;
the highest hell that ‘waits the heretick.
so learn to live and laugh and life enjoy;
or dead and dying you yourself deny.
//or death and dying to yourself deny.
Tuesday, September 13, 2005
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
1 comments:
some of the arrangements of the words strike me as kind of archaic and appear a bit contrived. like
'so learn to live and laugh and life enjoy'
Not that it can't be used in some situations, but I feel that over here it detracts from the reading because it sticks out from the rest of it.
The alliterations work and are suitably evocative. good job there. specially 1st stanza.
Post a Comment